Rhapsody in Red

I was unsatisfied with my first try at a story about the Red Matter in Star Trek. It was fun, and it captured a scientist's voice fairly well, but it was coarse and it didn't feel much like Star Trek. I gave it another try. This story feels more like Star Trek. Contains movie spoilers, bad characterization, and not as much Data Prime as I'd originally intended.

( Rhapsody in Red )